I can’t see you, I have no eyes.
I can’t hear you, I have no ears.
I can’t touch you.
I can’t remember you.
I can’t love you.
The void has taken everything from me.
Everything but the lingering thought of you.

Ellie opened her eyes for the first time, and all she could see was white.
“(She’s awake)”
She heard a voice, but she could not comprehend what it was saying.
“Where am I?”, she tried to say, but no sound came out of her lips.
As the white light faded away, she found herself face to face with a young man 

“(-a  I do?)”
She heard another voice, again, speaking in a language she could not understand.
“(Let me see.)”
Another face came into her sight, it was that of a wrinkly old man, his features were tense and his brows were arched as if he were mad, and yet she could clearly see kindness in those icy eyes of his.
“Doctor Ghaus.”
She found herself thinking.
And then again: “Father.”
“(Give me the key)”
Her creator spoke.
“(Are you sure you want to do this? I mean, we don’t know what will… I mean, if she starts to…)”
She watched as the old man closed his eyes, thinking.
“Father,” she tried to say.
Nothing.
He sighed, and opened his eyes again, now staring directly at her face with determination.
“(Give me the key, boy.)”
Her father moved out of the way, and she was left staring at nothing but a white wall.
She felt something in her back, like a tickle , and then something in her core shifted, like cogs in a clock; and then her upper back split vertically into two sections slowly rising up, almost as if they were wings.
Suddenly, a sharp pain took over her whole body. She felt herself trying to scream, but again she couldn’t.
“(Shit. This shit is more complicated than I remember.)”
“(Doc. , I think I heard something.)”
“(Shit.)”
Her father took a deep breath, and than another wave of pain took over her.
Again, she tried to scream.
“(Shit!)”
“(Doc.? I think they’re coming Doc.!)”
The sound of someone knocking on metal.
“(Work, damnit! Work!)”
A final wave of pain shook her to the core, and she heard a scream.
It took her a few seconds to realize it was hers.
“(Let us in!)”
She ignored the ominous voice as she concentrated on her hands instead; her own, moving, human hands, with fingers and nails and flesh.
It felt so strange, being able to move.
A loud thud.
A muffled voice from behind the door could be heard.
“(Damn it. Try again!)”
The young assistant’s eyes went wide.
“(Doc.?!)”
“(Shit. Shit. Shit.)”
There was something in their voices; something Ellie recognized as panic.
“What’s wrong?” she asked.
The other two barely even had the time to throw her a perplexed glance before the door burst open.
“(Hands where we can see them!)”
A tall, muscular man pointed something at them, something that felt like danger.
Ellie saw her father and his assistant throwing their arms up high, an was quick to imitate the gesture.
Other two man came into the small room and restrained her companions as the large man pointed his gun at her forehead.
“(Oh my God…)” She heard sadness in his voice. “(Don’t! Please, please!)” her father cried but was quickly escorted out of the door along with the assistant, one of the armed men giving a nod to the one pointing the gun at her before closing the door.
“Who are you? Why are you doing this?” she asked.
The man looked surprised for a second, his muscles tensed and Ellie thought he was going to pull the trigger, but then he relaxed, albeit still pointing the gun at her.
“(Can you understand me?)”
Ellie squinted her eyes.
“(Can. You. Understand. Me.)” The man repeated the same exact sounds, only slower this time.
“What are you trying to tell me?”
The man sadly shook his head. He took a deep breath, and then, with shaky voice, he spoke again:
“(Doesn’t matter. Just… I’m sorry, kiddo.)” He looked her in the eyes. “(I promise you won’t feel anything.)”
And he pulled the trigger.

This short story was submitted by my daughter Sophia Lahey. The artwork for the post is hers as well. Please let us know what you think about it in the comments. Thank you.

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For those of you who want to make or develop a magic system but aren’t quite sure where to start, it’s a lot easier than it seems at first. Maybe it seems too confusing for you or maybe you don’t think you’re creative enough. Whatever your reasons are, developing a magic system doesn’t have to be hard or confusing and thanks to Ian, I’m here on this guest post today to try to break it down for you.

What you need to know before you start thinking about your magic system is what type of magic system you want. There are different types, much to your surprise. I’m not talking about different types in terms of how different the magic itself is. There are magic systems similar to Game of Thrones where it’s briefly in there but not overly present – just a whisper in the background. Then, there are magic systems like Lord of the Rings, where it’s in there but it’s mysterious and only a few grand people can do it and the audience/readers don’t really ever learn how to use it. Then there are magic systems like books/shows such as Shadowhunters, and even anime like Fairy Tail or Avatar, the Last Airbender, where it’s broken down and explained throughout the course of the show/book so that the audience can learn and understand how it works.

What you need to decide is which one fits the story you want to tell and which one you want to do the most. Once you have that figured out, then it’s time to be creative. If you aren’t very creative, don’t worry.

The greatest asset and tool I use is Pinterest. There are a lot of different pictures of fantasy art on there. What I do is when I see something, literally it could be a picture of anything – sometimes, it sparks an idea. What if…? That what if question is where it all starts. Whether your magic is explained or not, whether everyone in your world can use it or not, whether its common or not – those are all things you have to decide – it might be a good idea for you to decide how it works.

If you’re not creative, then that’s totally fine. The fun thing about magic is that it doesn’t always have to be explained. Whatever you want to do, just do it, make it mysterious and if the characters see it that way, then the audience will too.

But if you want to give it a go, then you have to think of a few things in order for your magic system to work. As yourself these questions:

How does my magic system works?

What powers it? All magic systems has to have some sort of power source. This, of course, can be anything from prisms to crystals, to energy, to pools and water, to the air itself, to particles, to some sort of creature or race, to rainbows. Anything.

Is it used by energy or another force or something else? If so, where does it exist or where does it come from? Does it come from a person’s body like physical energy does? Does it exist in the air and they breathe it in, like people do in Fairy Tail?

What can it do? Are there any limitations? If so, what are they? For example, in Fairy Tail, mages can only learn one type of magic – one person can learn fire magic but they can’t learn anything else. Or does can it do anything except make people fall in love and bring them back from the dead, like in Disney’s Aladdin?

Are there any types of spells that are forbidden? Why or why not? Is necromancy forbidden because it’s horrible? Is light magic forbidden because it’s too bright or too powerful? Are humans forbidden from learning it or maybe a certain race is?

Is there a price to using it, like in Once Upon A Time – all magic comes with a price – ?

Now, pictures on Pinterest belong to other people, so you can’t use them, obviously, but they can spark ideas. Maybe you see a picture of a girl walking in the snow with a silver sky and it sparks an idea for a magic where people have elemental magic like in Avatar, the Last Airbender, but the effects of it change the color of the sky. Use the pictures as inspiration, whatever they may be, and use them to spark ideas of different things that can literally be anything.

When developing your magic system, don’t hold yourself back. Let your imagination run wild. Make rules for yourself and stick to them, but remember that magic is magic for a reason so typically anything works – so long as it doesn’t break the rules you’ve set in place for magic in your story.

Most importantly, have fun!

About the author:

Joanna White earned a Bachelor of Fine Arts degree in Creative Writing for Entertainment at Full Sail University. The Valiant series is her first published work, which first started off being updated on a website called Wattpad. She lives in the country of Missouri with her husband, where she continues to work on her other upcoming books. Writing has been a passion since she was ten, when she wrote her first book. Ever since then, writing has become her life outside of her family, God, and being a nerd.

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A reckless young woman named Averella does what no woman has ever done.

She disguises herself as a man and purposefully gets herself arrested and thrown into Zagerah. Her brother Gabriel was taken, and with his disease, he will not survive on his own. She has no idea what to expect inside the prison; all she knows is that once men get taken, they never come back.

The Hunters will find her.

Genetically altered to be faster and stronger than humans, the Hunters use their powers to find and kill every prisoner who enters Zagerah. The only ones who can defeat them, are in fact, themselves.

Jared is a Hunter. It’s all he’s known, all he remembers. He kills ruthlessly and without regret, one prisoner after another. When a new prisoner Dalex shows up, everything begins to change. Jared goes undercover to make Dalex and the other prisoners believe he is one of them, a prisoner himself.

No one knows the truth.

He will trick them.

Toy with them.

Then, he will kill them.

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